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Abel : Here you have the second chapter!
Seth : All of it in a PDF.
Cain : All you have to do is to click or drag the corner of each page to look back or forward through the comic.


Chapter I:pointr:triple-e-comic.deviantart.com/…
Chapter III:pointr:triple-e-comic.deviantart.com/…
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You're art is getting better; and you seem to be bringing in more of the story...something we didn't see much of in Chapter 1. I also like that you're bringing color in; but I don't think you should do a page or two of full color and return back to black and white. However, I encourage you to use partial color, that really brought a sense of urgency to the scenes in which it was used.
The only big negative I'm going to bring up is language. Please, please proofread what they are saying, unless it's no mistake that they talk off-kilter to normal people. Either way, it's distracting and detracts from the story. In all fairness, that only became an issue in the last five pages.

I can't wait to see what comes next.
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In comparison to chapter 1, the addition of more colour is definitely an improvement. I would say that the mainly black and white background, with splashes of colour is more attractive and in keeping with the style you're currently using within the comic.
The artwork itself is also notably shifting, you seem to have more confidence in your drawings of Cain and Abel, and their facial expressions are interesting but not overt.
The introduction of the new characters as the story continues, I feel, keeps your story all the more fresh.
My one critique would be that Seth looks a bit too similar to Abel. It would have been more intriguing for all three hell brothers to look differently, as any development in the physical relationship between Cain and Seth, would insinuate that Cain is unconsciously attracted to Abel, which I don't think is the direction you were going for.

(Also thank-you for throwing the llama, or I wouldn't have found your amazing page) :) x x x
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llulichan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;u; this is great.. I need moooree :heart:
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : Well there is also left this : 
Chapter I - The Leaking by Bonds-webComic   and this bonds-webcomic.deviantart.com/…
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llulichan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awh thank you so much, now I'm officially an obsessed stalker .//.
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : We hope you will enjoy these two chapters too since they show an improvement in art and also a deeper look into the plot. 
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bluefairysoul Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is getting more interesting
Abel looks sexy in black clothes (You should use them often *-*)
Seth surprised me XD
The girl at the end is cool too
I like how you draw the expressions :D
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : I don't really like black clothes that much but it was a necessity. But thank you!
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RealNiggaBlackJack Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hmmm... Abel is the cutest and most attractive thing ever in glasses and I'm shipping Seth and Cain :P
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:iconbonds-webcomic:
Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : *blushes* T-thank you!
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RealNiggaBlackJack Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
o///o why are you SO cute OH MY GOD?
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pikadiana Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
huhuhu abel is the cutest thing ever >.<
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:iconbonds-webcomic:
Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : *blushes* Thank you..
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:iconpikadiana:
pikadiana Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
huhuhu i'll kidnap you later
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SlashAnimateYUS Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
So Cain is a prickly pear, lol and Abel is adorable Big Fool Emoji-28 (High Five YES) [V4] I love that the comic is predominantly black and white with just hints of colors. I can't wait to see where the plot is going, like.....demons? What's their deal....hmmm.....
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : We are happy to hear your feedback and the fact that you enjoyed it!
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SlashAnimateYUS Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
bunneh icon3 
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AcrylicHeart Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really enjoy the randomized splashes of color. Your pallet is a bit pastel, but it does seem to work in this case. Further character development was nice, and the addition of a new individual, Seth, was a nice touch. His character design offsets both Cain and Abel's nicely, and brings the group full circle. Also, he's a little shit. xD I love the way you turned Aaron around to be an actual nice guy rather than the punk we saw in the beginning. I was really pleased by that. ^^ (I also enjoyed seeing him in that tanktop. Keheh.) Once again looking forward to more!
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : We are happy to hear you enjoyed it.
Cain : And we're also thankful for the feedback! 
Seth : We hope you'll enjoy the third chapter too!
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AcrylicHeart Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome; you all keep up the good work and don't give your author too much trouble! :)
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ShiroZengestuGF Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student
:iconohmyglobplz: S-Seth!?!
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Seth : Yes?!
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ShiroZengestuGF Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student

oh um *Cinnamon! I choose you!!*

:iconcinnamonplz:*Cinnamon is intimidated by the rival*

                               *Cinnamon runs away*

                                   T.T

 

 

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ShiroZengestuGF Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student
wow, secretly not a green haired douche.....
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : Yes, he's a good guy.
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LivB08 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This comic is cute. I like it <3
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cain : Thank you! Be sure to check out chapter 3 too!
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LivB08 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well actually I have read all of the comic pages you have posted so far. And looking forward to read more. Chapter one is in my favorites :) (Smile) 
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Peroin Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh the story becomes interesting now ;D
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:iconbonds-webcomic:
Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cain : And there are chapter 3 available pages too!
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Peroin Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i rather wait for the full version but thanks^^
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cain : Well there's a page up weekly. It will be months since the 3rd chapter will end. *laughs*
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Peroin Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D too bad. Then i'll have to start to reading it page by page. You better make it interesting *evil laugh*
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cain : If you enjoyed the first two chapters, I'm sure the 3rd one will be better!
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SparkleFairyMangoFsh Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
wait, green-guy's nice??
Albino??? :la:   D: framing??

it seems the characters are developing well :3
some twists making themselves known
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Seth : We're happy to see you're so enthusiastic about it! *laughs* You can check out the available pages for the 3rd chapter too. We have weekly page updates, on Saturday.
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SparkleFairyMangoFsh Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I'll try to keep up-to-date  :3
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Asakurata Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Poor Cain D: Nowhere welcome ._.
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cain : *long sigh* Nowhere..
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BellJorienViola Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I have a question: What part of the year do these two first chapters take place in?
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : September. Why?
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BellJorienViola Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I would like to take part in your summer contest so I wanted to know whether some things I will write about could be possible.
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : You can consider it the next summer. 
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BellJorienViola Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
That is exactly what I wanted to do. :-)
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FlyingCoconut Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
i like how witty the Girl is~~~~ :iconsuggestivedaveplz:
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cain : *mumbling* I don't...
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FlyingCoconut Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
*pats cain's back* OH COME ON BRO! i know you have gone through hell but

wait...

Hell... get it? HELL! XDD

oh gosh im not good at this puns :iconlazycryplz:
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cain : Hell is a nicer place. 
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SophizzleIzHere Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think Abel looks better with glasses :meow:
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Bonds-webComic Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : Thank you! *smiles*
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SophizzleIzHere Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:la:
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KikuHonda64 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Fangirl squeals begin*
Is it weird that I ship Aaron and Abel
And Seth with Cain even more
And woah Seth is acting all sexy on p. 27 :eyes:
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